You have made a good start here and I like the idea you have come up with for your new audience. I do however, question you placement proposal as I don't think it links with the new target audience.
To improve: - look at TV listings and find a more appropriate spot to advertise the product - you need to spend a lot more time on your target audience slides and you must show you understand the terms and then can relate them - check your wording/phrasing (and spelling, punctuation and grammar) throughout, e.g., it should be based 'on' not 'off' - you don't need quite so much about Pulp Fiction in there but you could link to the new 'The Wolf' adverts that have appeared on UK TV - don't link to the BAP code, screen shot sections that are relevant
Connor,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and I like the idea you have come up with for your new audience. I do however, question you placement proposal as I don't think it links with the new target audience.
To improve:
- look at TV listings and find a more appropriate spot to advertise the product
- you need to spend a lot more time on your target audience slides and you must show you understand the terms and then can relate them
- check your wording/phrasing (and spelling, punctuation and grammar) throughout, e.g., it should be based 'on' not 'off'
- you don't need quite so much about Pulp Fiction in there but you could link to the new 'The Wolf' adverts that have appeared on UK TV
- don't link to the BAP code, screen shot sections that are relevant
Ellie